Great story. Clever plot and excellent haracterization. Lovely.
From: lgvu Date: 03/30/2012
I CAN NOT BELIEVE I HAVE NOT COMMENTED ON THIS STORY and I give you permission to slap me silly. I have read this story many, many times, and each time it is exciting, suspenseful and sexy. It's one of my absolute favorites. So exciting and well written.
From: alynwa Date: 12/23/2011
Amazing storytelling! Thanks for sharing.
From: Kt Date: 08/12/2010
Wow...... That was amazing.
From: Xparrot Date: 07/10/2009
Eee, fun story! Very exciting, and delicious angst with both of them, Napoleon thinking Illya is dead, and Illya worrying about Napoleon. And a happy ending to top it off *is most satisfied*
From: nataliya Date: 07/05/2009
I tend to be impatient with a lot of plot and action ("get to the relationship"), but you write it so well and so true to the series that I was riveted. Wonderful dialogue. I could hear them saying all of it! Loved the gradual realization of how they felt about each other. And last but not least, you managed to make the "omg, I thought you were dead" story fresh.
If you're not a professional writer, Elijah, you should be.
From: Periwinkle Date: 03/06/2009
This is really well done. I was fairly sure that Illya was alive, but Napoleon's reactions were done so well that I was drawn deeply into the story very quickly. I also like the section in which Napoleon admits to himself that he's been unfair to the junior agents.
From: Deb Date: 01/18/2009
Thank you for this story. Really well written with such believable plot and characterization. I hope to read much more from you.